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A girl can’t wear black and be happy
A girl can’t wear bright colors and be sad
A girl who doesn’t follow trends must be a loser
And a girl with no “boyfriend” must be damned  

A boy who treats women right is weak
A boy who beats and bruises them is a real man
A boy who shows emotion is forceless
And only the assholes are left in the end

A boy can’t talk to a girl
Without them being lovers
A girl can’t invite a boy over
Without it being a date
It’s “impossible” for them
To just be friends

A boy can’t love a boy without being sent straight to hell
And a girl can’t love a girl because that’s a sin as well
If you’re not straight
You must be gay
There’s nothing in between in their eyes
But in their eyes you’re all damned anyway

In a perfect world
You could love who you want
And act like yourself
But that perfect world
Is much too far away
EDIT: Thank you all so much for all the faves and comments! :D It really means a lot to me.




Yep, a shitty poem. Enjoy XD Just my thoughts on life ._. I'm a little angry and some people right now, so, yeah.

I didn't mean to offend anyone with this poem, but hate comments will not be tolerated either.









DO NOT USE THIS ARTWORK!!!!!
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:iconnefariousschemes:
NefariousSchemes Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Soooooo, what happens if your a boy without a girl friend? *Looks through you* Nothing. Oh, that's a relief. No, you are nothing....Oh :,3. Delightful narrative poetry though. I suppose that's what it is. And also the delectably dark undertone of that, but I suppose its just inherent when referring to society. 
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:icongypsymountainman:
GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Professional Writer
Bravo!
Amazing!
Wonderful!
(I say, live your life, let society be damned)
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconclockworkscar:
clockworkscar Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
One of the most truthful things I've read all day.  Good job, awesome person. Good job.
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconfrostychica:
FrostyChica Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So much truth. right here.
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconsun-lily:
sun-lily Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist
You show so much truth in this poem. Great Job!
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconsun-lily:
sun-lily Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist
You Are Welcome 
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:iconizzy3301:
izzy3301 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Love it!
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconclaireluvs1d:
Claireluvs1D Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was just thinking yesterday about how sad I am that stereotypes and homophobia are still so prevalent in our society today, & this poem pretty much nailed my feelings. Great job. :clap:
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I hope you feel better soon :hug:  I'm confident that things will get better eventually, but we still have a long way to go.

And thank you :D
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:iconclaireluvs1d:
Claireluvs1D Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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:icondesu-death:
desu-death Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
This is exactly how I feel about our society. It's a shame a perfect world is still so far away, but I hope I'll live to see things improve much further than our current state.
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly.  I hope so too :hug:
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:iconsintel-duran:
Sintel-Duran Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that perfect world is very, very, VERY far away. but slowly getting there
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly!  Well, maybe our great-great-great-great-great grandchildren will live in it :XD:
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:iconsilencedbook9:
Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
This is wonderful! It's okay to be offensive when you know something is wrong!
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :hug:

And yeah, I guess so :XD:
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:iconsilencedbook9:
Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
you're welcome~
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:iconmylittlesquirrelgirl:
MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It's not bad, I love it!
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconmylittlesquirrelgirl:
MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome.
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:iconiamoret:
iAmoret Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Lol, according to society, I am happy damned loser, like 40 guys' lover, and I do the impossible. :giggle:
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds awesome :D :highfive:
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:iconbritishkunoichi:
BritishKunoichi Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally agree with you! Anyway, just because society says we can't doesn't mean can't. Why should we listen to society?
This is great, well done! ^^
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
And yeah!  I try not to listen to most of society, but sometimes they really make me angry.
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:iconbritishkunoichi:
BritishKunoichi Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, same here. Society annoys me a lot sometimes, but it's ok because we have the Internet to rage on ^^
Btw thanks for the llama :iconsnugplz:
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep :D
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:icongihlince64:
GihLince64 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
you have some skills at writing :)
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D

Though, it's kinda weird how I put almost no effort into this and everyone loves it :XD:  All my other poems that I worked real hard on no one seemed to care about :P
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:iconslytherinacres:
SlytherinAcres Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i know that feeling!

btw, love this!
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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:iconslytherinacres:
SlytherinAcres Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :huggle:
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:icongihlince64:
GihLince64 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
but you did! oh how i wish i was good with words (just to express why i liked the poem XD)
i guess it would be easier for me i i wrote i portuguese
i can't write constructive critique in english DX
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are good with words :D  Especaily since English is your second language. 

And you should write a poem in Portuguese :)  I would love to read it, plus, I can always translate it using Google Translate
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:icongihlince64:
GihLince64 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
i have one thing i wrote here, but i'm not sure if it's a poem XD

maybe i should post it? >u< 
and thanks!
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome :D  You should post it!


And NP!
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:icongihlince64:
GihLince64 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
i'm kinda afraid of posting it officially e.e sorry 
here it is if you want to see sta.sh/0k8ryl2heki
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhappytearsplz:


It's so amazing!  Why are you afraid to post it?
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:iconnightclaws001:
Nightclaws001 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Cool poem Icy :meow:
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)  I didn't expect all these comments and faves though @_@  It's kinda overwhelming.
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:iconnightclaws001:
Nightclaws001 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha :P Your welcome ;)
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xKYUU-CHANx Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I agree with your message whole-hearty. I know how that goes, where I live as well these things are a really big deal and I can not stand it.
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)  And yeah, but the worlds slowly getting better.  Though, I wish it could go faster :XD:
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:iconxkyuu-chanx:
xKYUU-CHANx Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Indeed if it did we would all be in great shape I feel. People would not be so looked down on for what they choose to do and how they feel for others.
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:iconhyaiite:
HyaIite Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly :hug:
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not-an-emo-girl942 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fabulous poem. :)  You definitely speak the truth here.
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